''In 1991 the things are very different, I remember when I bought my third car, it was a Renault 18, was small, but very comfortable. This was the car that I needed, because it was economic, and your grandmother liked so much. It was color olive green, had 5 doors. I bought it in january 22, for the birthday of your grandmother, she was happy with the new car. Now the cars are different, they have more technology, like a electric windows and burglar alarm, also they have best motors and horsepower.''
Nice story, check use of verbs in past.
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